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czarina_kitty ([personal profile] czarina_kitty) wrote2011-01-09 06:38 pm

Drabble: Endless Dance

Title: Endless Dance
Author:  czarina_kitty
Characters: Jack
Challenge: tw_100 #180: dancing
Rating:  teen
Notes: I do not own, or make any money from the use of, these characters. 
 

Seduction is an art form as much as a science.  Jack’s talent has been honed and sharpened over lifetimes of experience, the steps of the dance so well learned that they become habit.  The languid ballet of early attraction gives way to the tango of lust and to the waltz of easy familiarity.  Again and again and again throughout eternity.  Until each relationship is like the one before and the one after, each a carefully choreographed piece committed to memory and performed without conscious thought.  Until each relationship becomes nothing more than another step in the dance of endless life.  

[identity profile] aviv-b.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
You've given us Jack's whole existance in 100 words. Fantastic!

[identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm finding I really like writing 100 words at a time.

[identity profile] scifiangel.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Jack. To have a broken heart be routine.

[identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Given a long enough timeline, everything becomes routine.
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[personal profile] cookiegirl 2011-01-10 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, this is beautiful and so sad. Nice use of the prompt!

Just joined LJ but I think we've spoken on ff.net - you gave me a nice review for my TW Ashore story :) Friending you if that's OK and off to read your other fics! x

[identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

Yeah, that was me over at ff.net--I'll friend you right back.

[identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, so bleak and aptly described! Well done. ::pets Jack::

[identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

*waits for next challenge*

[identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent look at Jack, in all his manipulative glory.

[identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Given forever, manipulation should be a snap.

[identity profile] ebineez01.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
wow. for the prompt - that is really...wow. nicely done

[identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-01-12 07:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you.
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[personal profile] bk_forever 2011-01-12 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's sad, relationships becoming so much of a routine and a habit that they blend together, interchangeable. How can there be any real emotion, any joy, in a relationship when they all seem the same?

[identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com 2011-01-12 07:25 am (UTC)(link)
Eternity compared to the average human life span would make any real connection impossible.

[identity profile] redpearl-cao.livejournal.com 2011-01-12 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
So sad and true...

[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
oh wow, bittersweet but feels spot on