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Title: Where the Heart Is
Author:  czarina_kitty
Characters: Jack
Challenge: tw_100 # 162 homeless
Rating:  teen
Notes: I do not own, or make any money from the use of, these characters. 

 

 

Over time, he’d learned to protect himself from heartbreak.  Getting involved only lead to pain and the only thing worse than living forever, would be living in pain forever.

He refused to get close, kept his distance.  Always traveling, never putting down roots, never settling anywhere, always on the move.  Hopping from bed to bed, planet to planet, never waking up in the same place twice.

This time, when offered a room and companionship aboard the TARDIS, he refused.  It was too late for him.  He had learned:  if home is where the heart is, it’s safer to remain homeless.

 

Date: 2010-08-04 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com
OUCH!!! Right through my heart with that one, because it kills me that Jack walks away from the Doctor at that point. Brilliantly written, but seriously painful.

Date: 2010-08-05 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com
Thanks, and sorry. I figure Jack is a prime candidate for Reactive Attachment Disorder, or something similar.

Date: 2010-08-04 06:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huskyfriends.livejournal.com
Oh, poor Jack, such a wounded heart. Nice take on that scene.

Date: 2010-08-05 12:23 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-04 07:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] takisys.livejournal.com
heartbreaking. well done

Date: 2010-08-05 12:23 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-04 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Guh. That really hurts. Very nicely done.

Date: 2010-08-05 12:24 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-04 12:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] badwolf56.livejournal.com
God, the idea of Jack being so far gone that he won't even go with the Doctor? Killed me. Very good, and angsty, and good.

Date: 2010-08-05 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com
I think Jack would at some point develop Reactive Attachment Disorder. And the Doctor may live a long time, but Jack will still outlive him.

Date: 2010-08-04 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com
if home is where the heart is, it’s safer to remain homeless.

Oh, so accurate and perceptive!

Date: 2010-08-05 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com
Thank you. I came up with that line first, the wrote everything else to get to that.

Date: 2010-08-05 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
oh, heartbreaking, but feels spot on

Date: 2010-08-05 09:00 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-05 07:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bk_forever
Ouch! Poor Jack, but a very believable scenario, especially post-CoE. He let himself care too much for too many people, he just can't take losing anyone else. There has to be a limit to how much pain one heart can handle.

Date: 2010-08-05 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com
Thank you. The human brain has a limit to what it can handle, as well.

Date: 2010-08-08 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] samueljames
Aww, poor Jack so afraid of being hurt again.

Date: 2010-08-09 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] czarina-kitty.livejournal.com
Yeah, poor Jack, too many losses.

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