Drabble: The History of the Beginning

[czarina_kitty]

Title: The History of the Beginning
Author:  czarina_kitty
Characters: Jack, the Doctor
Challenge: tw_100  # 160 random titles
Rating:  PG
Notes: spoilers for just about everything Torchwood and Dr. Who

 

Standing on a London street, he considers his timeline.

“Jack, my boy, I need a favor.  Can’t cross my own timeline, but there is a message I need delivered.  I need you to go back.  This was never meant to happen and I need to know ahead of time.  We can rewrite time here.  Save the day.  Everyone can live.  You can have him back.”

As the Doctor runs towards a shop front, Jack steps forward, blocking his path.

“I’m sorry,” Jack says.

A high pitched scream is heard and the Doctor watches stunned as Jack fades out of existence.

Comments

[bk_forever]

Ouch! Jack fixes it so he either never existed or never became immortal.... Wow! Stunning!

[czarina-kitty.livejournal.com]

I really wanted DW series 5 to end this way.

[hab318princess.livejournal.com]

very intriguing

[czarina-kitty.livejournal.com]

Thank you.