Hmmm, an interesting one this; so many shifts in tone. First, Owen being deliciously preditory, then it turns into something different; tender, gentle. Then you mention "all bound in metal" and you can suddenly see where this is going and the whole tone shifts again. Very nicely done.
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Date: 2010-06-27 03:03 am (UTC)