http://jooles34.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] czarina_kitty 2010-05-09 12:52 pm (UTC)

Oh this was really good. Fantastic reponse to the prompt. It captured Jack so well and explored the themes or the work/home relationship. And of course, great ending ;o)

The line "“Right now, you might want to think about calling me ‘Captain’ or ‘sir’,” Jack growled." Terrifying; shivers down my spine - no really...

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