Oh this was really good. Fantastic reponse to the prompt. It captured Jack so well and explored the themes or the work/home relationship. And of course, great ending ;o)
The line "“Right now, you might want to think about calling me ‘Captain’ or ‘sir’,” Jack growled." Terrifying; shivers down my spine - no really...
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The line "“Right now, you might want to think about calling me ‘Captain’ or ‘sir’,” Jack growled." Terrifying; shivers down my spine - no really...