I thought this story was awesome. I loved how well it tied into the episode. I loved that Ianto initiated things by trying to roll play something very different, and Jack made sure they were roll playing themselves, since it fit the situation perfectly. I loved that the thing Ianto really felt bad about was setting Gwen up. I loved how strict Jack was during the entire punishment, knowing it was what Ianto would want. Great job with the story. Thanks for posting it. :)