Yay, I always get excited when there's new fic from you :)
That was great! I loved the array of implements! and Jack upping it to 25, hehe. I enjoyed the words 'visceral impact' as well!
I also thought it was really interesting the way you addressed Ianto sending Gwen out there without any idea what she was getting in to - I've not seen that issue covered in a fic before and hadn't really even considered it myself, but it makes a lot of sense and I can see Jack thinking of that. xx
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Date: 2012-06-11 08:42 pm (UTC)That was great! I loved the array of implements! and Jack upping it to 25, hehe. I enjoyed the words 'visceral impact' as well!
I also thought it was really interesting the way you addressed Ianto sending Gwen out there without any idea what she was getting in to - I've not seen that issue covered in a fic before and hadn't really even considered it myself, but it makes a lot of sense and I can see Jack thinking of that. xx