Utterly and completely enthralling!! I am amazed! I wouldn't give you 2 cents for any story I've ever read or ignored about this driven pitiful creature. Until now--blew my socks off could absolutely see this, felt as true as Tuesday. You did well, particularly "...she ran headlong into possibly the most handsome man she had ever seen. Piercing blue eyes and a 1000-watt smile, he exuded strength and authority, but his hands on her arm as he helped her balance were warm and gentle. When he softly chided her for not watching where she was walking while bringing a hand up to push the hair back off her face, she felt the bottom drop out of her stomach.
“What is that?” she asked without thinking." Ohmyword! I am just stunned at how I could see and hear this little exchange, perfect of the beloveds--and Jack would knock your socks off. Thank you for your hard work and finding a way of presenting a character which opened my eyes.
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Date: 2010-11-01 10:34 pm (UTC)"...she ran headlong into possibly the most handsome man she had ever seen. Piercing blue eyes and a 1000-watt smile, he exuded strength and authority, but his hands on her arm as he helped her balance were warm and gentle. When he softly chided her for not watching where she was walking while bringing a hand up to push the hair back off her face, she felt the bottom drop out of her stomach.
“What is that?” she asked without thinking." Ohmyword! I am just stunned at how I could see and hear this little exchange, perfect of the beloveds--and Jack would knock your socks off. Thank you for your hard work and finding a way of presenting a character which opened my eyes.